my perilous descent –
six-dollars-ninety-nine
just profligately spent
on candy: not a bar
or Valentine assortment:
a Cuban thick “cigar”
whose fat brown sweet deportment
recalls a mighty phallus:
stiff chocolate case – slick, spruce –
as if to make a palace
for all the praline mousse
which fills it like a lust
too bursting to abate –
plump – yearning through its crust
to spill: and promulgate
its glories you know where –
to consummate, make whole
and shamelessly lay bare
my sybaritic soul.
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Hi,
ReplyDeleteI found this page by googling your name. Which I googled because I found, by chance, a poem of yours called "Bird Painter". I absolutly must say that your work is phenomenal, the internal rhyming style is refreshing and rolls well. I love all the poems you have written here.
At the moment, I am learning to write poetry and am starting to take my personal education very seriously. I was wondering if you have any advice for me.
I can't stress enough how much I love your poetry.
Thanks Joe.
Rug - thank you so much! I don't expect comments here, so it's a thrill to get one. (I think of this as my poem depot.) Good luck on your work, and thanks for your kind words again -
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I'm sorry, Rug - I missed the request for advice - probably because I'm so bad at giving it. Read and write and read and write and stay true to yourself while you work on craft. There are no short-cuts I know of. But so much wonder on the way. That's all I know how to say. (wouldn't you know it would end with a rhyming coda!)
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